masterkoopa1015's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gay Retarded Hobos]

Some Truth in that Flash

You do have a point. The Kitty Krew just keeps putting useless crap on Newgrounds, and nobody does anything about it since apparently it passes judgement. As far as I know, we have two options as to what we can do about the KK:
A. MAKE them make non-crappy flashes, or
B. MAKE them leave Newgrounds, perminately (<<possible spelling error)
By the way, getting Underdog is an award you get for when your flash is the most controversial between Voted Score and Review Score, just to let you know.

LordZeebmork responds:

*permanently

and how many times do I have to tell you people that this is actually a Kitty Krew movie and I was mocking the original posts?

lmfaoooo

[Chickenball Z: Episode 1]

Great for a first flash

I was expecting some third-rate, 12fps crap since this is your first flash. I guess you proved us all wrong. Also, dispite the fact that this is yet another Dragon Ball Z parody, you used chickens as the characters, which, as far as I know, has never been done before. It was also funny from time to time. The only thing wrong was that the main villain was hand-drawn and everything else was sprited, which is an awkward combination. Aside from that, this is a very great first. Can't wait for the second one!
Graphics: 9
Story: 8
Sound: 9
Animation: 8
Creativtity: 8
Overall: 8.4
8/10
5/5 2.95/5.00 (+0.0069) Your 227th voter

William777 responds:

Thank you very much! I've realized I've made quite a few mistakes in the first episode, so I'll be sure to fix them for 2#.

[Mario Versus Tetris]

It has potential...

Well......I couldn't think of the best way to write this review, so I'll put it like this:
/\/\The Awesome/\/\
* Very creative plot line. I like the idea of Mario vs. Tetris

/\The Good/\
* Well...none I could think of :(

\/The Bad\/
* The frame rate. Crank it up to AT LEAST 18 fps.
* Increase the quality of the sound.
* Why would "L-block" kill Luigi? What did Luigi ever do to Tetris? :\
* The hand-made graphics need inprovement.
* In Red Koopa's debut in the movie, his wings were flapping backwards.

\/\/The Ugly\/\/
* The animation is out of whack. Mario was walking even though he was standing, or jumping, or falling, or even fighting.
* YOU NEED TO ADD SOUND EFFECTS!!! A movie without sound effects is like...a hamburger without the meat.
* If you had added vertical lines moving up in the parts Mario was falling, it wouldn't look like he was immobile in empty space. A distinguishable background moving upward also works, too.

If you address my facts, this flash will become a very great movie. It definately has potential :)
Graphics: 5
Story: 8
Sound: 6
Animation: 3
Overall: 5.5

6/10
4/5
1.97/5.00 (+ 0.0055) Your 266th voter

soraslayer responds:

thanks for the full review. I can definitely use it for help. Btw it was 20 fps lol, i am working on using sprite backgrounds, and sound effects i'll search for.

[Super Pivot Brawl!]

Not bad...

I agree with lead09. This isn't bad for a frame-by-frame movie. However, do not make the flash at the default 12 fps (frames per second). 18fps to 24 fps is the ideal choice. You just might get a 4.00/5.00. Who knows? You can only get better from here on out.
Graphics: 7
Story: 7
Animation: 5
Sound: 9
Overall: 7

masterguy-1243 responds:

Ok. I'll update it.